Friday, 21 October 2016

WALT: Organize our writing into paragraphs. 21.10.16


On sunday my family went to the shop in kaikohe, We shopped for bread milk butter and cream.

First we woke up and had breakfast, Before we went to the shop, We had to have a bath and then we had to jump out.

Next all seven of us jumped into the big bright van, And drove down the road to New World.

Finally we got home and made a fluffy beautiful chocolate cake, It tasted like sweet chocolatey pillows with drippy sprinkle icing.

                         THE END

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